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Confession

I SAW YOU SLEEPING THE OTHER DAY, WITH SO MUCH PEACE ON YOUR FACE. I WISHED IT WOULD LAST FOR LONG, BUT THAT VERY MOMENT YOUR PHONE RANG SOUNDING LIKE TIRING-TIRING. I SAW YOU SMILING THE OTHER DAY, WITH A SPECIAL GLOW ON YOUR FACE. AND PRAYED TO GOD IN TOTAL AWE, THAT THE SMILE ON YOUR FACE WOULD LAST FOR LONG. I SAW YOU TENSED THE OTHER DAY, AND PRAYED MY TEARS WOULD DRY. BUT KNEW YOU WERE DOING ALL THIS FOR ME, SO, JUST THOUGHT ABOUT THAT AND SMILED.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/27/2013 12:54:00 PM

awee. Mahima, this is a very pleasing poem. A sweet smile, and a very warm caring end. I noticed you have a tiny bit of what I would call alliteration. Maybe one day we can do a Collaboration together. I would love it... xox... LINDA

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/27/2013 1:15:00 PM

I had a very charming Christmas, .. However it is cold, and I miss the SUN.. I posted a Haiku, on Sun Dancing... heheh. Enjoy it when you have the time. I' am looking forward this coming year, in reading more from you. xox..Linda

Nocturnal Poet
Date: 12/27/2013 1:09:00 PM

oh god! thank you sooooooo much it will be an honor to collaborate with you by the way how did your Christmas go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vandana Sharma

Date: 12/19/2013 11:23:00 AM

so sweet emotions

Nocturnal Poet
Date: 12/27/2013 1:10:00 PM

thank you so much for reading my poem