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Condemned nice house had christmas trees and children sounds asking, “Ma, is it time to come in now?” oh how we stretched forth here and became grown voices are still haunting now glory gone once favored domicile all move in new what fools destroyed your beauty day by day? 7/10/16

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Date: 5/7/2019 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:29:00 PM
this goes so well with the picture. It's sad to see that ruination. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:36:00 AM
Hi Janis, You penned a well written and meaningful poem. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:28:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:22:00 AM
I love how you did this wonderful poem, Janice. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 7/15/2016 9:12:00 AM
big congrats here, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/15/2016 8:44:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea
Date: 7/14/2016 2:59:00 PM
Very nice,Janis!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/14/2016 8:47:00 PM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 7/14/2016 1:24:00 PM
Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest, Janis, wonderful poem. Hugs Eve
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/14/2016 1:38:00 PM
Lovely contest and a new challenge for me....Thanks.
Date: 7/13/2016 5:06:00 PM
sad to think of a loved house becoming so ruined.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/13/2016 8:26:00 PM
Yes, Thanks

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