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Concrete Jungle

Concrete jungle, rats and cats Illuminated cats eyes traps draw us in Grin when you fall no applause when you win Jungle Life with jungle things Food is scarce though greed is breeding No Lion in sight, Tigers died from the fight Eyes appear dim darkness steering you in Want is need, need not want No one cares for believing Jungle days Jungle sunset Watch where one places there feet for some step too far and the jungle is no more This jungle has but a one way door For once was free and all so clear In the jungle now nothing appears But concrete jungle, rats and cats A song without substance no beat no clap For once was free and all so clear The inhabitants of the jungle made the jungle disappear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/1/2010 4:06:00 PM
niice!..i read through most of your posted poems which i enjoyed and you've got a serious talent for sure!..a very passionate view on love no doubt!..thanks for checkin out some of my writing, im glad you did cause it introduced me to yours!
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Date: 8/20/2009 7:58:00 AM
Like the last line. Keep writing. Sara
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