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Comprehend

Comprehend The breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you, only if you have a mind ! A redolence to perceive, melody to comprehend, brush to the soul's eternal truth, beauty to an eye's content ! Written July 26th, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma On line 7- Rumi For contest "Complete six lines" by Nette

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Date: 7/27/2015 9:43:00 AM
I like your innuendos. Good job.
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Date: 7/26/2015 11:19:00 PM
Very poetic and quite a smart idea of emphasizing the second line!! Beautifully written. Good luck in the contest Dr. Upma
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Date: 7/26/2015 1:05:00 PM
Beautifully penned Dr Sharma - i chose the same line - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:15:00 PM
I like this, Dr. Upma, My favorite is line two......Kim :-)
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