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COMPATRIOTS Compatriots , where are you compatriots ? On our a nation let’s pause a bit: Money , money , money , money... Peace dying, children crying All moving as if all is well Take a look at what nation has become : Riots in south , terrorists in north ; In the land of our births Only God can say who is next Thousand today, thousand tomorrow Shame , what a shame !!!

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Date: 2/26/2014 10:28:00 PM
Wow...VERY POWERFUL STUFF here, Kayod5. Using creative economy of words you have said what might take a newspaper willing to print TRUTH, several editions to say! BRAVO!!!
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Date: 2/26/2014 11:57:00 PM
Thank you Michael,it is a great honour to have you on my page. Stay blessed.
Date: 1/31/2014 4:29:00 AM
outstanding poem of great truth Kayod5 you have excelled Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/27/2014 9:48:00 PM
This is awesome, I surely loved reading this amazing poem this evening! You have written a delightful piece Koyode, Great Work!!
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Date: 1/28/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Russell. Kayod5
Date: 1/27/2014 3:14:00 PM
a deep and hard look at materialism... this piece is bold and well expressed,K... shine on!.. huggs
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Date: 1/27/2014 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Nette. Kayod5

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