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You’re lovely… Like the sun saying good morning to the vast blue sea Like the moon sitting idle, shining lover’s light for me Like the stars in the heaven that twinkle as they dance Like the burnt red shades of dusk, inspiring all romance The vastness of the heavens and the gifts upon this earth The gentleness of new born babies, soon after their birth The birds that fly so freely, reaching forever to the sky They’re all so beautiful, yet you’re the focus of my eyes

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Date: 3/4/2009 9:56:00 PM
What a truly sweet and romantic poem this is, Michael! Such lovely visuals! Beautiful work! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/3/2009 8:56:00 PM
I really love this poem assoume write
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:05:00 AM
Like the krielle flavour Michael.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/1/2009 4:57:00 PM
So romantic...so lovely, who wouldn't melt with this one?? ~ Carrie
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