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Last time we spoke was at your window I'm concerned for you though I'm sure it didn't show. Don't trust communication electronically, 'cause that's not me. The words that were written... I wasn't even allowed to see. Take your rage out on me, I deserve it. The whole situation is just a lot of bulls*** Responsibilities; their happiness is in my hands I have a role in life, I know you wont understand. They mean too much. What was I supposed to do? I had to make a choice and I'm sorry it wasn't you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/2/2016 12:51:00 AM
Wren Gervais, nice to see this one again. SKAT
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Date: 7/31/2013 1:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured writing!...Milt
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:58:00 PM
Wren, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/16/2013 10:19:00 AM
-Hi, Wren. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/15/2013 8:03:00 PM
read what i wrote you
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