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Common Ground They would emerge sandy grisly looking beings mysteriously become a presence, a part of a momentary event Following the scent of happiness, creeping past the invisible sentries, blending into the fabric of time’s need for companionship. They carried the rudiments of fun, a smile, a stick, two seashells, a bucket, a bent shovel. The borders shrank then grew to include all, the moat around the castle spread, new towers were erected, soft stones were placed as tribute to “seaweed” demons. As the sun faded the surf approached, slowly, innocently, inevitably. The grisly beings withdrew, wraithlike in their disappearance, returning to their roots, withdrawing into time’s shadows. I would remain with my son to watch the surf erase the evidence of the mystical castles built by un-named, bright faced children drawn to the scent of happiness, building togethercastles in the sand. 11/15/2016 submitted to – Privacy is like piracy yet copy cats are unlike authenticity – Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/26/2016 3:05:00 AM
Following the scent of happiness, creeping past the invisible sentries, blending into the fabric of time’s need for companionship. //...grisly beings and togethercastles.... i llove it. Good luck.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/26/2016 9:50:00 AM
Just another day at the beach Darren
Date: 11/18/2016 8:19:00 AM
Interesting work..It grasp and led the reader to a surprise ending..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 11/20/2016 10:29:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Sara.
Date: 11/15/2016 8:27:00 PM
This is fantastic!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/20/2016 10:29:00 PM
thanks Christy for stopping to read and comment.

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