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Commitment Till Death Cause the Part

Signed to dwell in a comfortable locked cage where smoke also comes out from ice; moving gradually, taking it page by page, nurture the hunger then you can eat even half cooked rice. It’s like bad costumes but in a beautiful stage or a boring occasion, well attended by funny guys. In comfort, in difficulty, in ecstasy and in rage, on each others skin, seldom disturbing as lice. A year, then some decades and the union is coming of age, but the flavor still remains, due to the preservation of its spice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/23/2015 2:21:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Funom :) -I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/13/2015 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise

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