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Coming of Age

He was 11 when his first scars began to appear In the beginning his scars were small and not very deep Originating at school his hazing began This boy was bullied He was changing and his friends didn't like it They teased him He was a twig and had a squeaky voice He had no one to help him So he turned to the blade He cut daily to escape the emotional pain His body continued changing His scars became deeper He couldn't handle becoming a man He couldn't handle the stress in coming of age As he developed he gained responsibilities The world expected more from him he wishes he could go back to the boy of his youth but knows he can't His body growing bigger His shoulders broaden The weight in becoming a man is heavy He wants to stay this little boy The thought of being a man terrifies him Now has mood swings He's not happy all the time like he used to be He angers easily and Wish to remain that little boy Then he realizes He must learn who he is as an individual He must endure the changes He must push on Listen to advice Stay fit Be patient These scars are symbolic A badge of honor Decorating your self-identity Transforming you into the man you wish to become.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/29/2014 10:58:00 PM
Nathan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:34:00 AM
BRAVO! I loved this... Keep writting! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on avatars and names to read others poems. Leave a comment and they will have a permanent link back to yours.
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Date: 11/17/2014 12:09:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Nathan - I choose your first great bio poem - Well done :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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