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Comin’ Through They stand there monuments to stupidity blocking progress, denying access or egress to the doorways corridors checkout lines coffee pots of life JUST STANDING THERE totally enamored of themselves - the urgency of their idle chit-chat. Suffering from auricular atrophy unable to hear anything but their own voices, immune to common courtesy looking at me as if “I HAVE A NERVE” disrupting their insensitivity by requesting “PERMISSION TO PASS THROUGH” this huddle of hubristic pomposity. They are masters of the “HARRUMPHHH” face a look designed to make the dog pee, the cat bristle and slink away, me know that I have offended the sensitivities of the insensitive ruffled the feathers of the featherless dared to insert a comma into their run on existence. John G. Lawless 8/1/2015

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Date: 8/13/2015 2:56:00 PM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:11:00 AM
Thanks Sara, always nice to hear from you
Date: 8/13/2015 7:03:00 AM
I identify with your frustration, john. Well done in the contest. Julia, xx
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Julia, I sometimes mutter as I squeeze past...."does dinner come with this lovely intimacy"....I don't linger awaiting a response....
Date: 8/11/2015 6:02:00 AM
I have come close to committing numerous acts of violence in such situations John...Congratulations sir! - Tim
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:08:00 AM
TIM, you're old enough to remember when "older" women used "hat pins"....Well--Grandma Kelly was reputed to have used them for some nefarious purposes.....
Date: 8/10/2015 1:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem John! Great work!
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Date: 8/8/2015 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7:~),what my mother in-law in those upcoming situations she'd pretend she accidently ran into them and say sorry I wasn't looking . They'd just give her a dirty look and let her through. Hugs Eve
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:06:00 AM
It's nice to know that your mother-in-law has a few "power forward" post moves. Thanks for the high mark.....TOUCHDOWN/extra point--GOOD
Date: 8/8/2015 9:58:00 PM
John, Congrats in Mary's contest. **
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Date: 8/3/2015 1:34:00 PM
John this is an excellent free verse, deep and intense and so well penned, a fantastic 7
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:02:00 AM
Thanks BW. Sometimes I wish that the sand in the hourglass had this problem....but it just keeps moving easily past. Appreciate the high mark.
Date: 8/1/2015 8:37:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant and a running commentary on my daily public life. Brilliant. Kind regards, Ian
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Ian Jones
Date: 8/14/2015 7:34:00 AM
That's ok John. I'not exactly the Silver Streak myself. I've lost count of how many times I've tried to access Pottery Soup! Kind regards, Ian
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John Lawless
Date: 8/14/2015 7:00:00 AM
Ian, I'm a little behind in my replys. Thanks for waiting at the door while I dawdled.

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