Comforter

the glistening and pristine snow covers the ground like a blanket of protection

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/1/2008 7:04:00 PM

I find comfort in watching the snow fall on TV. It is a beautiful sight but not when I'm shovelling it. Vince

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/30/2008 6:31:00 PM

Beautiful and very true, snow is warm, like a comforter. love Kristin

Lena W

Date: 10/30/2008 3:36:00 PM

I like this one, sounds comforting. Lena

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/30/2008 3:29:00 PM

I like the poem Comforter. It is a beautiful write -a new concept -snow working as a comforter to the shivering ground. I am not so sure as to its Form being a Haiku, a seventeen syllable Japanese poem written in three lines. Perhaps you will check it out. Thanks for your elegant comments on my Haiku Disguise. You are generous. Best wishes. -Mohammad