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Below is the poem entitled Comforter which was written by poet Deneen White. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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the glistening and
pristine snow
covers the ground
like a blanket
of protection

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  1. Date: 11/1/2008 7:04:00 PM
    I find comfort in watching the snow fall on TV. It is a beautiful sight but not when I'm shovelling it. Vince

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 6:31:00 PM
    Beautiful and very true, snow is warm, like a comforter. love Kristin

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 3:36:00 PM
    I like this one, sounds comforting. Lena

  1. Date: 10/30/2008 3:29:00 PM
    I like the poem Comforter. It is a beautiful write -a new concept -snow working as a comforter to the shivering ground. I am not so sure as to its Form being a Haiku, a seventeen syllable Japanese poem written in three lines. Perhaps you will check it out. Thanks for your elegant comments on my Haiku Disguise. You are generous. Best wishes. -Mohammad