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Comfort and Content

Day after day the waning of spring, Burst into summer with blossoming; The lark is singing wild with glee, High on a branch of a hawthorn tree; And daisies fair with the virgin rose, Deck field and hedge with summer snows. A cold white moon in a midnight sky, Paints leaves silver as the winds pass by; With the happy whisper of phantom feet, Swirling like dust down the street. The stars hang thick in the cherry tree, The west wind scents the briny sea; Scarlet roses set heavy with dew, Bring the night I have captured for you. See the dance of swaying flowers, As they kiss the wind through midnight hours; For in the night there is no ear, Though larkspur stretch and try to hear. Who calls this vagrant heart in me, To tread the night in odyssey My heart is tuned to the night and sings, Of passion I feel for all these things; My mind is content and needs no words, For illusions playing on their minor chords; Or torn desires and longings deep, That put an anxious mind to sleep. What a better gift for a life well spent, Than the rewards of comfort and content.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/27/2012 10:38:00 AM
Hi Elizabeth, I think this is one of your best. But then most of us think that everytime we read one of your poems. But this one truly does dance among the stars. It actually had an emotional, physical effect while reading. And you rapped it up perfectly. May comfort and contentment fill your day. Bye. :)
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:18:00 PM
Such delightful phrasing, with imagery rich and vivid... clever couplet rhyming too. You, my dear, are a 'unique,' with every poem bringing fresh perspectives and passionate ruminations. No matter which of your pieces I choose to review I am rewarded with clarity, depth and conviction. (Could I be cheeky again, and ask you to look at Nightscapes... it's a tribute to T.S. Eliot.) THANKS!!!
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Date: 8/24/2011 10:06:00 AM
Your flow in this piece is stunning. This was quite the journey.
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:57:00 PM
You seem to outdo each poem you write(the sign of a very gifted writer)! A melodic piece indeed. I am always in admiration of your style. Congratulations on being a Premium Member as I hope a many and many more poets and readers get to view the words of one beautiful poetic Princess!
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:01:00 PM
Indeed. Beautiful words, my friend - and so true
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:17:00 AM
This poem makes me feel comfort and content. Great job
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:33:00 PM
soup mail
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:26:00 PM
12 lines, any subject, humor or sad. biblical or mad. just give me something that i can connect with you. preferably a contest. but if it be for love let it be. john
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:29:00 PM
let me wait no longer. for with you i must collaborate on something. shall you start or shall i. i shall trust you with any thing i write. johnny
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:40:00 PM
Yes, my friend, I have read your write and I ask myself how you do the miracle with golden words all the time, I don't know. God bless you always. Again, My heartiest thanks for consideration of my poem to display. bl
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Date: 8/22/2011 3:05:00 PM
So many beautiful images of summer, especially the evenings with the "scents of the briny sea." You can smell that all the time here at the beach, Elizaabeth. But the roses and larkspur have sweet fragrances only found in better soil. I love your description of the way your are so in tune with the music of the night. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:57:00 AM
Very Lovely....It was a very soothing read.I felt like I could see it as I read :-)
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:00:00 AM
Melodious poem with excellent imagery in first 2 stanzas.Yes no gift is better than a comfort and content mind.
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