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Come Together

Hundreds of people passing hallways each day, but how many times do we stop, smile, and show them the right way. No matter the color of their skin, or the color of their hair why can't we just all act like we care. Why can't we all be friends, stop with the cliche what would you say to that girl if it was her last day? Treat everyone equally, and help those in need not stare, or laugh but do a good deed. Come together, make a change help each other with our problems, don't look at someone like they are strange. Comfort, joy, and success it is all we are striving for so why don't we do it together and stop with the civil war. We are all the same, we all make mistakes so why can't we just learn from it and stop halting life with those hydraulic brakes. Let's all be friends, and works things out and everything will come together without a doubt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 11:40:00 PM
kara! this is an awesome poem, I reall like it! =) keep it up
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Date: 9/27/2010 12:23:00 PM
Nice write , very profound, and welcome to Soup...always Michael
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Date: 9/14/2010 12:17:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... enjoy your stay on soup.. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/13/2010 8:58:00 PM
i love you kara and your the bestttttt person on this planet! i wish everyone would be more like you <3333333
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Date: 9/13/2010 4:14:00 PM
wonderful message! if only people applied this to their everyday lives..
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