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Come Take My Hand

Come take my hand And lead it to thy breast Where I may lay my head And listen to thy heart Come take my hand And lead it to the fire in thy belly Where I may love thee With tenderness and passion Come take my hand And never let it go That I may forever hold thee And ever whisper words of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/24/2008 12:06:00 PM
Such tender words of love and passion. Great write. I'm happy I added a little brightness to your day. You have certainly added a little romance to mine. Love, Robin
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Date: 11/2/2008 2:42:00 PM
Sigh...this too was romantic. You certainly have a way with words. Thank you for all your wonderful comments on my work. It meant alot to me. Lena
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Date: 10/31/2008 6:22:00 AM
Nigel this poem is both tender and beautiful - have a Happy Halloween - God Bless
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Date: 10/31/2008 4:52:00 AM
You are the master of making words make love. I read your poetry and the line after line the words speak to each other and comes alive. Masterful job.
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