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Come Night Come

Come night, come, Let me enter, into the palaces of your Wondrous dreams For Weary, my soul has become, of day’s Relentless schemes! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 September 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 9/9/2015 1:54:00 PM

A write that touches so many souls at one time or another, and especially as we get older. Loved it!

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/7/2015 2:09:00 AM

...and may your weary soul find rest in the chamber of dreams until thr new light replaces the night...lovely lines, sire...and even more lovelier thoughts. hugs!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 5:48:00 AM

Thank you for your dear visit and your kind words, dear Kim!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2015 5:37:00 PM

Oh I wish i could get some proper sleep - I've not slept well since hubby had his cancer surgery:-( hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 5:37:00 AM

Wish you my dear your worries to be dissipated and you to get a beautiful relaxing and invigorating sleep! Thank you, Jan!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/6/2015 12:36:00 PM

Your descriptive depict image that brought your write to life in the eye and sense of the readers, makes them felt the pain that lodged within..... A well and profound write......A.M.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/7/2015 8:01:00 AM

My friend, A.M., thank you very much for your lovely comment!