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Fatal Oath

I've come to meet my death in time of war To fiercely fight and die with shattered sword A conquering King comes that I abhor Alone I stand as my end comes towards There will be no pause in this bitter fight They'll come at night like a gathering storm And leave me naked, but a sense of right With dripping blood in a Nightmare's firestorm The King once a friend slowed his pace 'till dawn Finds he was too late to execute my doom His anger tortured I've quietly gone With my final breath, my body did consume With bloodless edge now pulled to curse my name Falls on his sword his oath once sworn to blame 2/3/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2016 8:43:00 PM
Loved this Frederic! Congratulations
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:27:00 AM
FREDERIC, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:26:00 AM
Frederic, Congratulations, on your win. I wonder if you remember this contest "Come by the sword, Die by the sword?" Nice to see you take one of the top spots in Royal's old contest. LINDA
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:53:00 AM
Congratulation on the fine win with this lovely poem, frederic
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/22/2014 6:08:00 PM
thank you Dr Ram for reading and for your kind response
Date: 4/21/2014 9:29:00 PM
Hello Frederic, Congratulations, --Enjoyed your awesome win. Thank you so much for the support... Always & forever *Linda
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Frederic Parker
Date: 4/22/2014 6:09:00 PM
no problem Linda, your contest allows poetry to be seen that might not
Date: 2/3/2014 7:02:00 PM
Somebody knows how to write a sonnet [which King was this?] Cyndi has inspired us all. You should come give us your opinion on the Crown Sonnet blog? Light & Love
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/3/2014 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Debbie I will look up your Crown Sonnet blog again, thank you for your kindness...Frederic

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