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Come, Help Me

“Come, help me”, those words still rings in my ears The words of an old man I used to hear He would come daily and stand near my gate And I would help him to cross the road straight Leading to the post office on the square. I asked him about this daily routine He said, “His son left for job in his teens And comes to check mails from him if any” “Come, help me” His neighbor told me that his son was dead But the old man refused to take truth sad One day he got the post as if from his son And he used to receive the post anon Living in peace and never heard again “Come, help me” +++++++ July 30, 2014 Form : Rondeau (10 syllabic) Dr. Ram mehta Third Place Win Contest: Random acts of kindness by Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 8/6/2014 10:14:00 PM
DR RAM, :) The best policy is kindness and respect. Congratulations, on your "Random Acts of Kindness" win... Have a sweet day or night... Love LINDA
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:21:00 PM
An act of kindness that meant so much. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 10:56:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is so touching and beautiful. A story of unselfishness and an act of generosity that touched someones life. Thank you for the great comment on my Heroes poem
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Date: 8/1/2014 9:28:00 AM
Way to go Dr. Ram, congratulations. This is a moving piece.
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Date: 8/1/2014 8:23:00 AM
A truly fine write in a very hard form !! Big congrats on your fine win my friend!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:27:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats on big win Dr Ram!
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Date: 7/31/2014 4:46:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful act of kindness and a beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:30:00 PM
No telling what the kindness you shared meant to this man... Congrats on a great win, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/31/2014 3:02:00 PM
A true kindness :) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2014 7:31:00 AM
Great story Dr Ram ! Heartfelt and emotive ,, good luck for contest !
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Date: 7/30/2014 3:35:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece..I love the story. Its what makes me think there is hope yet for this world. BG
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Date: 7/30/2014 2:15:00 PM
A wonderful story Dr Ram
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