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Comanche Man

As far as the eye could see we rode our horse comanche man and me we rode in snow and in the rain through the mountains and grassy plain we forged for food lived off the land like his ancestors from way back when then one night we stumbled on a bear thats when comanche man dissapeared so on my own with just a knife I faught this bear for my life the fight was long then the bear digressed I put the blade between his breast he looked at me with his gentle eyes a finally moan before he dies I thanked the bear for his life I dressed him out and cleaned my knife Comanche man was never there he lead me to my test the bear

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Date: 7/10/2016 5:33:00 AM
Wow, how wonderful was to hear In the spirit of Karl May, so dear To ancestors of American Romanticissism Now I fight with the Bear of rheumathism Embracing my old bones crying for the gold Of Experience living near that Comanache old Dreaming the Girl of Horizon.
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Anthony August
Date: 7/10/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thanks that's awesome.
Date: 7/10/2016 3:41:00 AM
Anthony, good to see you. Skat
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Anthony August
Date: 7/10/2016 8:42:00 AM
You too,I dig your handle.

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