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Colour of Life

We give to life what it deserves, Or less if we're nerved; The despair of living, and with sunburnt toils, Enticing weary hearts to bleed so. And nights in heated bloom, Or disturbing looms; That which stains the sheets of slumber, Dreaming of more tender moments. Where death torments, set us free, For it is there we shall be moved, And indicate the wisdom of being prosperous, Cracking the whip as burning thoughts sway. Old swells, young swells, It's the colour of life, From everything beautiful to everything sad, But we're entrusted to keeping faith. The youth of tomorrow needs the love, Or despaired minds will falter, Seeking there a suicide train to the edge of heaven, Will they see in time, the tragic trace of despair? We are all surely prone, As tranquil as rain, For it can calm the nerves, or raze ones life, Through floods and cyclones it is known. So life is fraught with fragility, Yet we give it all our hope, To run free, to fly towards a flourishing zeal, With inconvenience pushed to the rear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/6/2015 8:31:00 AM
This is a perfect first offering, welcome to the Soup.
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Date: 4/4/2015 6:57:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching
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Date: 3/16/2015 12:35:00 AM
Charles, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:44:00 PM
CHARLES:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/7/2015 11:32:00 AM
- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Charles - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:20:00 AM
Dear Charles Yet me start this by welcoming you new friend to the fellowship of the soup, after reading this poem of yours you sound like a great addition for our site, remember we encourage new writers to just have fun here, and to express themselves with freedoms abandonment, and creativity. I believe that poetry is becoming a lost art, and we must encourage others to breathe life into this legacy for the futures sake alone, thank you for your comment on in the pain of night poem, cheri
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Date: 3/6/2015 3:01:00 AM
Charles, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:27:00 PM
very well constructed and expressed charles, nice job
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