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Color Wheel

I watched the days pass uniformly, Nothing special or exciting. The monotone bleakness expresses A lack of things enticing. While some people caused dull interest None were especially noted, no, Like you were when you smiled And my color spectrum exploded. The rosy pink and emerald green That colored your lips and eyes Were as striking as the beauty created By every bright sunrise, Which could only be compared To the brilliantly-spun gold That is your hair Each and every time the sun grows old. The feeling that filled me As I memorized your colors Could never have prepared me For being memorized by others. This bright sensation overwhelms me, As my cheeks turn glowing red, When you tell me that you love me And rest your chin upon my head. I lean against you, shining yellow, And I understand how it feels To have felt each emotion On the color wheel.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/19/2016 11:51:00 PM
Miranda Simmons, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2016 9:54:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Miranda. :)
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Date: 4/16/2016 1:09:00 PM
Hi Miranda, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:41:00 PM
Miranda Simmons,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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