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Collage of a Drifting Love

Memories of a love I’m losing arrested thoughts on sculpture paper- an altered photograph, adorned by hand cut leaves, evergreen shades, and lace From the page emits, cricket songs drifting to gloaming, and on and on into my own mandarin twilight. I adjust a pair of glittered wings to your thorax, twiddle them these symbols of your intending flight Next, I place a crumpled love letter. its text, garbled by smeared on gesso Covered so no one will guess the message- except, perhaps where a small spy glass magnifies, I LoVe YoU- I LoVe YoU- High on the page a bluebird brightly sings 10/28/2013 10:17 AM

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Date: 6/4/2017 11:21:00 PM
This is one I missed SuZ. It is very beautiful...mystical and spiritual in its conveyance. I hope you are well my friend? Blessings, Connie : )
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:12:00 AM
Hi Suz, Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2013 9:30:00 AM
Sweet and romantic. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/13/2013 8:55:00 AM
liked your poem. congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:25:00 PM
what a very creative entry with those images bringing things to life. Congrats on your win, Suz. Glad to finally see this one.
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Date: 11/12/2013 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the win, suZ-D
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Date: 11/12/2013 7:36:00 PM
mandarin twilight- exquisite metaphor! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:29:00 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your fine win :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 6:29:00 PM
Ahhh. Nice!! Congratulations
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Date: 11/12/2013 12:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win. Glowing imagery in this very lovely poem. :)
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:15:00 AM
Congrats...I really enjoyed this one. BG
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