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Collaborating In the Clouds

Oh God Beyond and yonder, they tell me, as far as can be, does there exist "beyond expectations" a land that seems to me, a melting place of loving hearts vibrating rhythmically but sweetly mute, Where speech & communication without words is complete. does beyond expectations lie these lands................ this land where everyone is each other's priority and just not options of superiority or of inferiority. such is a land, my mind, it tends to seek, they tell me to find this land the possibility is very bleak where I see not walls, barriers or borders of human creations of any kind, striving , fervously.....to ........find, Oh God... please help me, please make me understand, As, my churning mind it...... seeks............. such lands
name: sashi prabhu

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Date: 7/9/2012 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in P. D.'s "Clouds" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 7/9/2012 11:10:00 AM
thank you Carol
Date: 7/9/2012 1:40:00 AM
Sashi congrats on your win...David
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 7/9/2012 11:10:00 AM
thANk you David
Date: 7/7/2012 11:56:00 PM
Sashi, congratulations with your beautiful collaboration in the clouds. Read every poem over and over. Thank you for the support, God Bless :-) PD
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 7/8/2012 12:14:00 PM
thanx PD!!!
Date: 6/19/2012 11:38:00 AM
Soooo beautiful...your words are so beseeching that I can't help but think they are heard with a compassionate ear! Wonderful!
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 6/19/2012 7:16:00 PM
thank you Carrie!
Date: 6/19/2012 10:49:00 AM
Sashi, this is a beautiful written poem - Thank you for "a land of love". - oxox Anne-Lise
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 6/19/2012 10:52:00 AM
thank you Anne lise.
Date: 6/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
My prayers are with you my friend.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 6/19/2012 10:52:00 AM
thanks a million!
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Steven Henderson
Date: 6/19/2012 10:45:00 AM
Peace and many blessings to you!

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