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Cold Love

Seems your heart has frozen and your love you have taken, breaking my heart taking my devotion, my time, and my emotions. Leaving nothing but feelings of ice cold love. Did I go wrong in giving you companionship, Sharing laughter, joy, gladness, sorrow, and pain? Did I love too soon, too deep, too humane? My cold love, when did you get so frigid, Is it when I whispered sweet words into your ear? When I hug you tight and played in your hair? When you laid in my lap and we peered into each other’s eyes, where I saw forever for you and me? I miss you my friend, my companion, my love, Missing your arms around me, holding me sincere. Your warm love draping my inner core, making me feel so secure. Cold love, will you not return to us, to embrace, to bond, to share our sweet forever more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/24/2017 6:31:00 AM
That's the hardest part for any lovers. A deep, heartfelt poem... Congrats Karen, for having your piece featured in the Poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 7/24/2017 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much. Appreciate your kind words. Peace!
Date: 7/24/2017 2:17:00 AM
Cold love, Which distance had shove. Nice one!
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 7/24/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, for your kind comments.
Date: 10/21/2016 9:30:00 PM
Beautiful karen, it's true what they say the hottest love has the coldest end. Great poem
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/23/2016 8:50:00 AM
You know it, Sofia, that's a fact. Thanks for your comments...
Date: 10/12/2016 4:16:00 AM
I really like this poem. I do not think it is the female perspective, but much more general than that. Thanks for the poem. www.ukotyrawnokon.com
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/12/2016 7:48:00 AM
That's alright Ty :)! Okay, your welcome. Actually, it was written for a friend who just a breakup.
Date: 10/11/2016 4:29:00 PM
A lovely poem Karen. I hope love will return for you..
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Karen Edwards-Gregory
Date: 10/12/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thank you, Tim. It was written for a friend....

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