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Cold

May 22 I was sitting in my backyard tonight watching the sun set. The moon was out and there was one star, one bright star sitting above the western horizon. As the sun began to set it got colder, but it was a good kind of cold. Not the kind of coldness that reaches into my bones and leaves me shivering. It just settles on my skin and slowly burns away.

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Date: 9/7/2010 8:43:00 PM
OH, I love this kind of cold too. I like a poem that just shows us one simple thought and describes it like this. Very nice, LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/25/2010 1:40:00 PM
nice D.E., well thought out have a nice one,..p.d.
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