Coiffured Hair

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finely coiffured hair blowing in fall's swift cool breeze.. for sale: crepe myrtle a hint of fall's chill tinges the leaves crimson red... auburn curly locks

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/17/2016 6:36:00 AM

just love these - wonderful haiku

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 8:32:00 PM

oh I love these delightful fall KU

Darren White

Date: 10/14/2016 11:42:00 AM

Such beautiful trees, such beautiful lines of poetry and color.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/12/2016 5:05:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, what a lovely fall poem, Sara.

Paloma P

Date: 10/12/2016 9:48:00 AM

I really enjoyed this, I didn't know what crepe myrtles were to be perfectly honest. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2016 9:02:00 AM

oh how stunning Sara - I have never seen one of these trees:-) hugs Jan x

Chris Green

Date: 10/12/2016 8:44:00 AM

I love crepe myrtles and have many on my property. Your poem is as beautiful as any bloom they have produced.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thanks for the visit..We went by a nursery wholesale farm yesterday..They had rows of crepe myrtle with only one center trunk then the limbs at the top with leaves which looked somewhat like a person shaking their hair out in the breeze..That is from where the idea came to write the poem..We have crepe myrtle on our place as well..They are nice and colorful in summer and the fall..Thanks for stopping by..Sara