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Coffeehouse Poetry

I wasn't the friend to you that you were to me all along. I must have been lacking I must have been wrong I figured you were done and slowing packing. Times got rough We created a wall You seemed tough But sometimes I wish you would just call. Just like glass, my heart was broken Just like a star you lit up my world. There are still words left unspoken. Inside of me, my stomach has swirled. I can't concentrate on anything I do At the moment, I am feeling confused. The sky is turning grey from being sunny and blue. My heart has been bruised. In the end all I have to say is : I love you, Do you love me? Our friendship is like a sheltering tree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/15/2015 12:33:00 PM
The government should be run by coffee house poets. Congrats on the feature.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 2/20/2015 10:22:00 AM
haha yea thanks!
Date: 2/15/2015 9:53:00 AM
Kay :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Kay Cassio
Date: 2/20/2015 10:22:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 2/8/2015 3:50:00 PM
Hi Kay, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:06:00 PM
KAY C, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:36:00 PM
Such deep sad imagery - its a shame when a friendship or relationship breaks down- sometimes we need to take a step back and let the other person take a little time out - who knows what the future will bring then - great write a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kay Cassio
Date: 2/5/2015 10:05:00 AM
I agree, and i have given her space and it is much better now. Thank you Jan!! :)
Date: 2/4/2015 11:10:00 AM
Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.
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Kay Cassio
Date: 2/4/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much! It means a lot, This poem was the best I have ever written.

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