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Cobwebs

Again and again, the spider spreads Her net on the busy highway - Cobwebs of metal strings; To trap the wondering fly, And again devour a soul. Early birds look out for worms, But when wayward and blind, They become victims of cobwebs; Then all hope is lost And the worm is spared. So watch out, travelers at dawn! For cobwebs have laid ambush To charm the wayward birds, And silence the morning melody Of the beloved songbird. (Read 1Peter 5:8,9)

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Date: 8/25/2016 12:01:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this, especially the final verse/lines. Thanks for sharing. W
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Date: 8/6/2016 1:43:00 AM
PolyCarp, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/4/2016 11:10:00 AM
Welcome to the soup Polycarp, if that is your real name, I applaud your parents for knowing and valuing true Christianity! This was an interesting first write, hope to read more from you.
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Date: 8/4/2016 6:54:00 AM
I don't see how this has anything to do with the bible verese.....
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Date: 8/4/2016 11:07:00 AM
I guess the Devil is the spider setting the trap for all of us songbirds. It's a little cryptic and really stretching the meaning of the verse.
Date: 8/4/2016 6:54:00 AM
Polycarp, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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