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Now dips in peace the bay And I must go Beyond the hills, the luscious fields Of jasmines purple, and down to where The starlight gleams below, And today I watch the lacquered morn Rise gently till the veils from peach lilies are drawn. Around the isles at dusk Cool and chaste they lie, While fragrant marigolds heave to sigh. In a daze, the sun sets on earth's dome Embossing a virgin orchid white; Its crown a trail like a bride afloat On dreamy air that meet the coast To settle in the vault of gold, While blossoms fair enrapture my view Bright as Flora's eyes! Shadow Hamilton's Your Favourite Old Poem #2 Flora--- Egyptian goddess of flowers 11/25/2014

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Date: 6/11/2015 4:13:00 PM
NETTE, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 6/11/2015 8:22:00 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem. Congrats!
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Date: 6/10/2015 7:23:00 PM
hmm drifting on fragment clouds Nette congrats on 2nd place hugs
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Date: 12/1/2014 8:57:00 AM
Beautiful...reads like a fairy tale scene, Nette! Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:53:00 PM
Nice as ever,congrats on the win Nette.
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Date: 11/28/2014 8:16:00 PM
Nette, I love the opening couplet...a wondrous invite to join you on your vision quest. Well deserved placement.
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:31:00 PM
Now that's poetry. Period. Well done. Nothing more to say except thanks for being you and sharing your vision. Peace, Terry
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:32:00 PM
PS: This will go down as one of my "Favs" and a "7" towards heaven:)
Date: 11/28/2014 4:46:00 PM
Just stunning nette. Fav. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:31:00 PM
Your beautiful poem brought me on your peaceful journey full of dazzling flowers and stunning fragrances. Congratulations on your win Nette
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:58:00 AM
Oh, the lovely language you use; it melts off the tongue. Beautiful, Nette. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/28/2014 11:31:00 AM
a delight to read this again - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:48:00 AM
truly magical pen love how this drew for me nette danced with the mind excellent piece
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Date: 11/27/2014 4:09:00 PM
Such lovely imagery throughout. My favorite lines are in the second stanza...this is so tender...glorious piece; I am uplifted...thank you very kindly. Always, Laura
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Date: 11/27/2014 12:26:00 PM
This is a feast for the senses...imagery at its best...a captivating flow, too; lovely ending...beautiful! #7 // paul
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:11:00 AM
I'm sighing like one of those fragrsnt marigolds-What a beauty this is dear Nette.
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Date: 11/27/2014 6:34:00 AM
I could picture it all, virgin orchid white--one could only imagine such purity---it's a real masterpiece, Nette
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:43:00 PM
A real gem Nette! Keith:-)
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:50:00 PM
So beautiful and I just noticed you used an egyptian goddess of flowers in it as well! the imagery is really good, Nette. Speaking of Mary jane, I think I would be like you and not even feel the effects of it. That will be a bummer if I ever get a chance to try it.
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Date: 11/26/2014 11:26:00 AM
Wonderful melodic write filled with rich imagery Nette!
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:03:00 AM
I'm always enthralled by the beauty of your write my very dear friend Nette! I love flowers and I love your poem so much! Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks also for your precious time stopping by on my poem. By the way, Christmas is fast approaching. How I wish, I can go back home but school holiday here isn't enough for me;(( So I'll just spend the holiday here again, away from my loved ones:(. How about you? Any plan for Christmas? Hope to hear from u again soon. Hugs and kisses! love lots,Leo
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Date: 11/26/2014 9:09:00 AM
Ahh!! I really like the flow, rhythm and rhyme in this one..Great contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2014 5:23:00 AM
Oh the wonder of flowers brought to vibrant life with your eye for beauty and your talented pen.
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Date: 11/26/2014 4:49:00 AM
Engrossing poem about the beauty of nature through flowers. lt was finely written because I can still see you totally enchanted by the different blooms, Nette.
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:14:00 PM
I can see you and gardens really hit it off Nette, and the magic you create there has spilled over to the page. Perfect, Blessings Carl
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Date: 11/25/2014 11:08:00 PM
Delicately woven; such floral wonder, Nette. Your poem entices!
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