Clouds Dot Pale Blue Sky

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Just observing the heavens..

. Clouds dot pale blue sky Playful pups, seals upon back.. Heavy downpour flash *Note:Click on "About This Poem"

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/25/2011 10:43:00 AM

your premium mind is showing....enjoyed reading today.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/25/2011 10:40:00 AM

cool pictures and apt haiku. like your inclusion of seals :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/25/2011 9:39:00 AM

Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper Sara. Thank you for sharing your always interesting writing with us. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2011 1:32:00 AM

How cool you figured out how to do the pictures, Sara. I wish I were that smart. Good images you presented.

Farah Chamma

Date: 8/24/2011 5:26:00 PM

A great Haiku..sweet and simple...

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 8/24/2011 4:01:00 PM

What lovely words Sara and your pic.note was a sight.Thanks for the very kind comment and sorry for your problem I'm not sure what that is.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa