Clouds

Horizon blistered with bursting white cloud patterns the grass needs some rain.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/10/2009 1:24:00 AM

Hi Bill, Congratulations on placeing in this contest. I can certainly see why. Your Haiku is wonderful. Lovingly, DAS-J PS sorry to be so late commenting...I've been recovering files... and there's still more to go.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/3/2009 1:37:00 PM

I love the first two lines of your poem! Very vivid and explosive images.

Sue Mason

Date: 7/27/2009 1:32:00 PM

Beautifully done here, Bill !! Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2009 12:46:00 PM

Bill, congratulations on your success in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/25/2009 12:51:00 PM

fine winning haiku! Bill!!! jimbo

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/25/2009 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your success in Raul's contest Bill. ~Trudy~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/25/2009 8:23:00 AM

Lovely. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Brian Strand

Date: 7/25/2009 2:50:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Bill.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/25/2009 2:01:00 AM

Bill, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 7/19/2009 6:02:00 AM

Nice Haiku Bill, images forming as i read>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 7/17/2009 11:43:00 PM

Like the images in L1/2 Bill.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments