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Cloudless Dawn

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Light so clear my eyes must close part way. I heard, “Let there be light.” and I saw. My eyes fill with sweet tears, as joy fell this morning; after a shadowy night of charades, understanding flashed. There are times when we must apologize for those things that we have NOT done.
by Reason A. Poteet, December 25, 2014 for Enchantment through a Prism – nette onclaud’s Poetry Contest Title # 1

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Date: 12/31/2014 9:27:00 AM
Congrats on he high place win and happy new year
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:52:00 AM
WOW! I can see why this do so well, Reason. Fantastic...Oh, but that last line sings. Hugs
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:41:00 PM
Hi Reason, big congratulations on wonderful top win! Beautiful poem full of inspiration and wisdom! Best wishes for the coming New Year! Sandra
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Date: 12/30/2014 2:10:00 PM
congratulations Reason on your fine win
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Date: 12/30/2014 1:51:00 PM
Lovely write that shows understanding; excellent final line! Congrats on your deserved win. // paul
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Date: 12/30/2014 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win Reason with this beautiful poem.
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Date: 12/30/2014 12:11:00 PM
All the best to you and yours in 2015.
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Date: 12/30/2014 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations Reason on your well deserved win. Lots Of Love Armand
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Date: 12/31/2014 1:46:00 PM
Armand? You make only the second person I've met with that name, the other is Armand Caffee of Henryville, IN. I had an uncle named Maurice Carl. He's in heaven.
Date: 12/30/2014 11:12:00 AM
very beautifully penned reason - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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