Cloud Nine

fingers left their mark lips left their trace all over I am on cloud nine...

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David Smalling

Date: 11/17/2010 5:48:00 PM

It is a place I rarely go, being afraid of height. But when I read your poems, some how I am there. One love, Wilma

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 3:51:00 PM

Wilma.You have an incredible skill.In so few words you manage to convey such alot.Here there is a great feeling of sensuality, mmm!! nice, understated, and yet capturing all the meaning.Wonderful.Glad you liked my words.I,like yourself, love to bring pleasure if I can through my poetry.Thank you for your appreciation. Love June -how I like to be called.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/31/2010 9:17:00 AM

To find such joy in love, I would be on cloud nine too, Wilma! (Can you hear the undertones of envy?) What a terrific senryu. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/31/2010 3:54:00 AM

Just up there floating..Very passionate work..Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/30/2010 12:23:00 PM

Finger painting pops in my mind after reading your wonderful work today....love your art today luv....always loved by Michael

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/30/2010 10:04:00 AM

lovely senryu Wilma

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/30/2010 9:44:00 AM

hmmm sure does sound like yours is more inspired, missy ;) mine's leaning towards the angsty (?? is there such a word??) ones-- yup flowing sadness, haha...

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/30/2010 9:14:00 AM

very expressive and sensual Wilma..sounds like you're smitten..if so good for you!Take care~Deb

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/30/2010 8:58:00 AM

You seem on the cloud of romance sweet lady :)lovely senryu.