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CLOSED CHAPTER

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CLOSED CHAPTER

written 5th april 2013

I 
I thought love was going to come
little did I know the pain it brung
I should have let it go
I had to hope one last time before I let you go
sometimes a mother can not love the child she bores
sorrow for her
sorrow for me
sorrow for her grandbabies
time to move on
the church is now our loving family
I feel joy and blessed
for I am atrest
they exept me an my family
just the way it ourt to be

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  1. Date: 6/8/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Again you write with a lot of passion here, but you have a few minor mistakes that take away from it. You do not need the first "I." The "atrest" should have a space between "at" and "rest." "Brung" should be brought and "ourt" should be ought. You might have been going for a dialect here, but unless the rest is written that way they look like errors. Good Job! Kim