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Closer to the clouds Soaring through the soft misty flocks of vapour Higher Touching the overstretched never ending horizons Stronger Closer to the clouds Reaching for the elusive galaxy scattered with stars Wiser. Metempirical Scenes Outside my window, birds perched on window panes Breathing the hopes of life Burying their worries, letting them go Soaring away the pains of yesterday Home The distance reassures me of the longer road I have Waiting working of what might come Relieving the old alleys Streets that left me hanging, roaming Stranded with loneliness Pause Break from the fast pace of life Dive into total surrender Break from our shallow life filled with plans The never ending ambitious dreams Capturing each moment, not giving any a miss Forgotten The small sentiments The simple notions The innocent thoughts And the crazy bedlams Unfortunate Life Thrive, we will.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/9/2013 9:12:00 PM
Eli, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 5/3/2013 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for your fine poem, you write very well Eli. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and poems here with us. - Wish you all the best. - (Give comments, to get back) - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/1/2013 5:11:00 PM
About your poem ELI: I like the way you ended the poem, almost like a thought on not giving up. Maybe we all need a string around the finger..why forget certain ambitions.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 4:43:00 PM
Eli, , Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems right now and the future. I like the enjoyment of meeting new poets and reading any new poems you may want or need feedback on. I hope the next time you are on the soup; you find the time and highly recommend your own favorite poem or your next post. You can always stop by and say hi if you like…. Thanks you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:35:00 AM
unique and interesting....it may be that you have two or perhaps three poems here....just a thought...the first verse seems to stand alone stylistically...the second verse as well....
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:23:00 AM
Great poem-- so true to the path of life. Welcome to P/Soup
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