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Climbing Awareness

Pollution corrupting sense The sense of self I’d recommend In this place I can’t be saved Save me now, I’ve lost my faith I’d bare it all to help mankind But what I’ve seen would make you hide In this world I can’t let go With so much truth to stir my soul Ignorance corrupting me Me that’s not who I should be Become more to sing aloud Allow myself to walk through clouds Flick through life if you think you must The static screams for you to rush Below pyramids of wealth Forget the height of truer self All this world corrupting love Love that can’t begin to trust In this place nobody’s heard But I must speak even though I’m scared Symbols lost between the lines You say you see but prove you’re blind Question what can make it so I will not stop until we know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/16/2008 5:21:00 PM
Love is the one thing in life that that can either bring total comfort or massive pain - sometimes both happen at the same time - Your poem was very well done - many blessings
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Date: 7/16/2008 2:32:00 PM
would the world be better without love. no, we need love. love comes in all sizes and shapes. this was a well wrote piece of poetry, well penned
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