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Ocean Beauty so deep Laughing while I'm splashing Wild abandon in my mind Peaceful

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/16/2011 6:52:00 AM

so luv abandoning my mind especially at the beach in the ocean Kristen..very refreshing one my friend..luv..

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/16/2011 5:29:00 AM

Sigh...yes indeed. Beautiful.

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/15/2011 11:12:00 PM

* “Wow * Such A Pristine & Tranquil Setting Yet * Almost Rapturous In Feelings Evoked Amid The Joy of Hearts Reflection Found * Ocean * Beauty * Laughing * Splashing * Wild Abandon * Peace * Perfection In Beauty Dear Lovely Kristen * A Beautiful Fave * Hugs & Kisses * Kisses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/15/2011 10:10:00 PM

Nice cinquain about the ocean! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.