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The p o r t a l to the PAST exists beyond an O L D gate, in the city of the D E A D the beloved wait; on her elaborate t o m b is an ancient date, his LOVE so great that he built her a monument. The entry is s e r p e n t i n e iron, quite ~ ORNATE ~, and her tomb- HIS architectural excellence; in time her l o v e r also took up residence, it is WRITTEN ~ he was a man quite prominent. My research found the s t o r y in a document, the man built his wife a grand RESTING place mansion; even after her young D E A T H he held his passion, the man would come EACH day with flowers opulent. Written- he became a recluse after her death, On the ancient ornate door, I left baby's breath. _______________________ February 17, 2016 Poetry/Canzone/CITY OF THE DEAD Copyright Protected, ID 16-758-542-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Screwed XII, sponsor, Rob Carmack Fourth Place ____________________ Entered in the contest, A Tomb of Ancient Bloom, sponsor, Justin Bordner Honorable Mention

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Date: 5/7/2016 4:41:00 PM
Broken , nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/28/2016 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings....Linda
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2016 10:03:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 3/22/2016 10:24:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, An awesome 7 for this tale of love and devotion that knew no boundaries between life and death. Congrats on your contest win. Cheers, Brian
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Constance La France
Date: 3/23/2016 1:40:00 PM
Brian thanks for the awesome and the 7 and the congrats !
Date: 3/19/2016 11:54:00 PM
Broken, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2016 8:45:00 AM
Linda, thanks for visiting my poem ~
Date: 3/15/2016 1:11:00 AM
An endearing tale you wove. Love lingers still for those that make an effort to remember. Exquisite writing.
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:04:00 AM
Timothy, thanks for the compliment and the exquisite, I love that word !
Date: 3/14/2016 2:14:00 AM
To live where love remembers, a tomb of their violet embers...the baby's breath can mean so much, a trace of tears, perhaps a blooming renewal Constance. I love the way romance lives in your visions...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:30:00 AM
Justin, thanks for a great theme to inspire and for my honorable mention, I appreciate that very much ~
Date: 2/19/2016 4:53:00 AM
best of luck in the contest BW, this is well written and a great theme to use
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:14:00 AM
Sage, thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 2/17/2016 11:21:00 AM
Haunting write, I love the title which suits the piece well.
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Date: 2/17/2016 2:44:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and the compliment ~
Date: 2/17/2016 10:24:00 AM
This passionate love is aptly immortalized in your write. Best of luck in the contest, Constance.
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Date: 2/17/2016 10:43:00 AM
Kim, thanks for visiting and the compliment, appreciate !

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