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City of Joy,Kolkata,6 PM

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City of Joy,Kolkata,6 PM

Gradually she changes her dress at the end of this winter day like a beautiful stage actress preparing herself for a play. At the end of this winter day City of Joy as she is called preparing herself for a play diamond petals slowly unfurled. City of Joy as she is called wearing her glittering ornaments diamond petals slowly unfurled blooming like a rose God sent. Wearing her glittering ornaments anklet to bracelet of lights blooming like a rose God sent waiting for visitors of night. Anklet to bracelet of lights Howrah Bridge is her necklace waiting for visitors of night checks her face on the Ganges. Howrah Bridge is her necklace like a beautiful stage actress checks her face on the Ganges gradually she changes her dress. © kash poet 2012 **Click on "About this poem" to see her necklace,The Howrah Bridge ========================000======================== Placement:5th ;(January 2012) Contest:City Lights Sponsor:Debi Guzzie

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  1. Date: 1/30/2012 12:21:00 AM
    Beautiful. Really liked it!

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 8:44:00 PM
    thanks for your comment tonight, Kash. .... still waiting!!!

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 12:17:00 AM

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 1:39:00 PM
    Hello hello hello Kash.. enjoyed this write that won a prize, also truly enjoyed the pantoum form you've used..) Oh and don't mind the greeting..i'm feeling a bit happy at the moment..!

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 10:04:00 AM
    THAT BRIDGE IS GORGEOUS IN YOUR PHOTO!! Glad you posted it. :)

  1. Date: 1/21/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Hi Kashi, You already know how much I love this pantoum of yours. Thrilled that you placed so well. I would have liked to see this at 1st place...I have a winning surprise for you...stop over to my poems list!! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 6:05:00 PM
    I must have seen this picture somewhere else then. It looks very familiar to me! bye now. I made myself late for class by posting that poem jsut now.

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 5:35:00 PM
    by the way, you did much better in this contest than my twinkling twinkling lights did with its HM, but your win is well deserved. Congrats.

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 5:34:00 PM
    I saw it, Kash,wonderful! I think I actually may have clicked on it and seen it before.

  1. Date: 1/19/2012 8:21:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win for your poem in Debbie's "City Lights" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/18/2012 10:41:00 PM
    Beautiful descriptions of your city. Congratulations on your win Kash.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 8:54:00 PM
    wow! love the color of this poem AND the bridge itself. inspiring write kash

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 9:49:00 PM
    wow...a lovley poem... and beautiful bridge... now i can imagine her necklace... xool...p.d.

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    anything new... lol... had to read this one again... this time... i clicked on what it was about...p.d.
  1. Date: 1/16/2012 5:16:00 AM
    you leave me speechless, kashi buddy... i am so into personification that this piece grabs me like a stray star... how i wish i could be there to watch the nights but your piece is more than enough to compensate for this yearning.. topnotch prize !... from priya..:) huggs! come visit..

  1. Date: 1/16/2012 3:13:00 AM
    This brings back memories of Kolkata where I lived for nearly one year, long years back, Kash, jag

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 7:41:00 PM
    What wonderful personification from you , kash. wow, you are pantoum boy! love the imagery. I hope one day to see the great Ganges.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 2:17:00 PM
    Kash, Thanks so much for commenting on my Tulips poem. A friend gave me a lovely bunch for my January 6 birthday: the Feast of Lights. Love, Nola

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 1:57:00 PM
    Kash... a very splendid poem... glad i had time for one more... love the vivid lights you display here... change is hard for some... have a nice one,..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 1:12:00 PM
    I really didn't like pantoums at all,....TIL NOW!!! Kash, this is as timeless a piece as they come..I am not kidding. Very proud of this write for you. I will keep this one in my treasured notebook for infinity! Blown away! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 12:58:00 PM
    Hi Kash! This is probably the best pantoum I have ever read! It's going into my favs. Hugs, catie :)