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Cirrus fledged cleft

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Ammended 9 11 2012

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Cirrus fledged cleft

Circa vista under seen

life and spirit flow..

sublime outline forms

little hill folds down..

cross the valley bleating sheep

combs coombe the eyrie hawk..!

copyright Joe Maverick 2011

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 5:09:00 PM
    poor sheep' i think~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 9:40:00 PM
    A far reaching mental view of "little hill" and "bleating sheep". Feeling as though seen as though from a hawk's eyrie? Gives a warm and gentle feel, Joe. I'm sure I'd commented on this one before, but it hadn't shown.:) I'm trying to find ones I've missed, but I do remember this one!! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Hi, Joe~once again, it seems as if every poem I click of yours has a comment of mine. Like Andrea, WHOM , I'm just asked to point out a poem, of hers i did not read. Now, I'm asking you, if you can point out a certain poem, you want me to critique all over again. I would like to relax, and comment a poem of yours with , a second thought... please ! Give me a title,, I want to read a poem and give it a hoot of a comment,,, I want to knock your socks off,, with the proper observation on your poem.., if you must know I'm bored, and I read many not so thrilling poems this morning.. well I did enjoy most... anyways..I'll be here till I pass out... like a turkey ....pd

  1. Date: 5/22/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Yes, joe, we need computers today. That poem I wrote fits my MOM however, almost to a T. Except she is not worried about them. She just avoids them!!

  1. Date: 3/13/2012 1:35:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/10/2012 8:29:00 AM
    Don't understand the last line, Joe. Please enlighten. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 2/29/2012 4:08:00 PM
    the second is stronger than the first Joe..they are sweet writes which bring me back to my love for England, Scotland, Wales and other landscapes like them! BIG hugs! Chas wants only 4/6/4 and he won't let me use a picture or alliteration LOL anyway NO matter..we learn we grow! Light & Love

  1. Date: 2/8/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Lovely haiku, my friend

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 5:44:00 PM
    Just here to say a big HELLO, Joe!! thanks for the comment. I was off for the weekend and now trying to play catch up!!

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Thanks so much for your kind comments on my poems. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 1/28/2012 4:44:00 PM
    Yes indeed. I love looking at the clouds and all the pictures we can find in them. It's so relaxing. Great job here. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 1/26/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Joe,, stopping by to say.. lol..i have other comemnts on here.. If i stop by one more's gonna look like spam.. thank you always..p.d.

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 12:19:00 PM
    Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Joe. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/25/2011 11:20:00 AM
    Merry Christmas, Joe! No I did not get your soup mail. Did you send it to me this morning. I go through my mail everday... Hope to get it soon... How is your holidays so far... I'm just sitting here in the restaurant... Not busy at all... just a few customers.... Best wishes always,..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/14/2011 9:25:00 AM
    Good morning Joe, stopping by to say hi... and yes, i would love to tell you about my restaurant... especially if you love them waffles house... how are you? Me hanging in there... xox~ always..p.d.

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 8:01:00 PM
    Stimulating haiku here. I have never seen the word "commbe" before. Thank you for your support! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/10/2011 2:48:00 PM
    I can almost hear the hawk call, such a strong picture in this ku Joe; I love what you did with this.

  1. Date: 12/7/2011 1:17:00 PM
    Reminds me of the newly born lambs in and around Ben Nevis, with various birds awaiting their opportunity to strike. Fine Haiku set Joe :)

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 7:56:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/6/2011 11:43:00 AM
    You NAILED it on this one MAV! DIGGitt!