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Circles

Circles, circles always circles time turning round and round seasons come and seasons go and the sky flows endlessly on. From birth to death turning circles, circles always circles spiralling in blaze of colour the pretty flowers live their cycle. Relentless is mother nature as all things she controls in circles, circles always circles just keep up with the flow. A life starts while another ends as the planets daily keep their cycle and moon and sun bow to each other circles, circles always circles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 3:41:00 PM
dear shadow, I am going in "circles" trying to find a poem of yours to comment to!! Can you think of a favorite of yours I may not have ever seen yet!!
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Date: 1/15/2015 6:31:00 PM
I agree with Andrea in the construction of your gorgeous Kyrielle, I will add that I loved every word. Just a joy to read.
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Date: 1/16/2015 8:06:00 PM
ty Maurice I appreciate your support hugs
Date: 1/10/2015 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Shadow. Our life revolves around circles
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/13/2015 6:45:00 PM
ty Ralph hugs
Date: 1/7/2015 1:55:00 PM
Great choice of idea to present the theme for the contest . Reads like a winner to me..Those circles give an aura of many emotions. Thanks for your visit to my page with your delightful review.Sara
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:47:00 PM
ty Sara hugs
Date: 1/6/2015 6:37:00 PM
the key in a good kyrielle is to have a good repeating line and you SURE did find one with the circles, circles, always circles. GREAT job, Shadow.
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:47:00 PM
ty Andrea appreciated hugs
Date: 1/6/2015 2:59:00 PM
Hello Shadow, love this girl in the native culture the symbol of the circle is the core of life itself, all things are part of this wonderous ring. Love your poem and it's deeply expressed meaning, glad you apart of my circle of existence, sisters of the poet heart, cheri
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:48:00 PM
ty Cheri circles are good, hugs
Date: 1/6/2015 8:18:00 AM
Circle is the most basic figure in the universe Shadow. Excellent poem. A perfect 7. Adding it to my favlist.Love Hugs!!!>>rajat
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/13/2015 6:49:00 PM
aw ty so much Rajat hugs

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