Cinquain Three

Kiss softly lingers as she wonders will this love last forever

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Marc Acrich

Date: 2/18/2018 8:46:00 PM

I have to find the poem favorite

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/19/2018 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Marc.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2013 9:16:00 AM

VERY good cinquain. ME LIKES

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, trying to get the hang of it.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 12:30:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, trying to get the hang of it.

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/5/2013 8:39:00 AM

Just a few words convey a vivid image into any reader's mind.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 12:32:00 PM

Thanks for commenting and visiting.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/5/2013 8:21:00 AM

Richard, you have mastered this form! I'm so impressed!!! You always take a challenge head on. Faving this one too. My file sure is filing up with your poems!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 12:33:00 PM

You are sweet Eileen. You hold a top spot in my favorites as well.

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/5/2013 7:46:00 AM

It's called a "cinquain"... I call it a great "cinquain" my friend! Let's not be strangers again!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 7:51:00 AM

Not strangers rather the victims of limited time. Thanks for visiting jack.

Bonchance Longfall

Date: 5/5/2013 7:27:00 AM

The short poem allows so much to be filled in by the reader. I find writing the short poems to be a good challenge. Nicely done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/5/2013 7:38:00 AM

Thanks, I am new to this form. I like how it causes me to think beyond the few words I am allowed.