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Cinderella's Advice

If Cinderella coached the team each fall She’d tell her players, “Just keep your eye on the ‘ball’.” November 24, 2015

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Date: 11/30/2015 10:30:00 PM
Very imaginative--Congrats! Janice
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Date: 11/29/2015 9:25:00 PM
Hi David, LOL, she needs to become the coach of the Dallas Cowboys. Jason G... has fallen asleep before the football season begun this year in SEPT. Love the poem. LINDA
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Date: 11/25/2015 11:52:00 PM
Clever, David! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/24/2015 6:04:00 PM
David, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations David
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Date: 11/24/2015 2:51:00 PM
ha ha love it congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/24/2015 12:02:00 PM
Excellent in its uniqueness and presentation, David. Congratulations... a merited win! // paul
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Date: 11/24/2015 10:17:00 AM
David, good write! Congrats on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:23:00 AM
this was AWESOME!! Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/24/2015 9:14:00 AM
Haha.... Love this! Congratulation on your win!
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