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Christmas Scene

So what is different The vagrant limps across the careening snow Scantily unkempt From inside the bank with glittering glass I watched him pass Carried by the flow Of that dilapidated mass For whom tolls the jingling bell And toll, and toll ignored again My heart Shunning the superficial cheer Left all I heard Devoted to a pilgrimage of eyes Where the fire glows warm And hope gathers moth-like I see him push, and pushing through Put out his arms to touch the tired flame As though an angel had troubled it Or perhaps a rudimentary manger And Christ so far from it While he sleeps secure on warm On the bank floor Under the beautiful Christmas tree. I walked away Full of grief and empty While behind me toll, and toll again The jingling bells of the Salvation Army. O Mary, hail us not as Joseph in this despair Nor magnify too much your feat He too has swollen and blistered feet And I volatile from the pilgrimage Ask questions of my faith Tell me, for all the change from manger to cross, What is different now from then?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/19/2009 7:24:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 12/19/2009 8:46:00 AM
A really fine piece, full of insight. Love, daver
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Date: 12/18/2009 8:59:00 PM
Very well written, it's cinematic, comes to life...........well done! David
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Date: 12/18/2009 6:01:00 PM
L,nass, I have witnessed these same scenes and asked myself the same questions.....All we can do is love and help those who need help ...help in what-ever way we can. Sometimes it makes makes me cry...like right now. Love, lainie
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:04:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, good story!
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:25:00 PM
Oh, L'nass you've dug deep as you usually do from that well of enlightenment! What is different now from then? Awesome job! Goes to my favs. Peace and love, Audrey P.S. I thank you for taking the time to read some of my poems and post those wonderful comments! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you,
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Date: 12/18/2009 10:57:00 AM
Magnificent write, Shango, that reminds us how lucky we are to have the comforts of a roof over our heads and warmth in our hearts. One for my favorites, dear friend. I'm so glad you came back to Poetry Soup before the end of the year and hope you will continue to post during 2010. It may be difficult to have a Merry Christmas when those around us are experiencing the troubles you describe, but I do hope you'll find some joy this holiday season. Love always, Carolyn
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Date: 12/18/2009 7:11:00 AM
Very moving and thought provoking poetry, L'nass. Simply beautiful, and addresses questions that also often cross my mind. Thank you so much for your comments on my poetry; they are appreciated so much! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/18/2009 6:30:00 AM
Poignant and powerful...very thought provoking and deep. Not much has changed as to how we treat each other ...sad that we have come so far in so many ways..yet, we as humans still lack the true essence of Christ. To love one another as we love ourselves. Thanks so much for this wonderful write L'nass and for sharing. Many thanks too for taking the time to read my writes and your always kind comments are much appreciated! God Bless! ~Mary
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Date: 12/18/2009 5:32:00 AM
Your poetry never fails to provoke thought. Of course I have never read a poorly written poem by you. Excellent heart felt write. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/18/2009 4:29:00 AM
You post a good question here. In America this should not happen for we have programs to help people get better care than that. Keep the toughtfull and creative pen flowing. Sara
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