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Christmas Eve Retourne

How blessed I feel this Christmas Eve beneath a moonlit winter sky as lights ignite to mimic stars while snowflakes melt into our skin. Beneath a moonlit winter sky where footprints vanish instantly from pathways paved with silver snow, the waning wind breathes quiet sighs. As lights ignite to mimic stars on trees that blend into the sky, they cling with incandescent grace to frosted branches cased in ice. While snowflakes melt into our skin and carols float upon the breeze, our clouds of breath rise through the night to coalesce with chimney smoke. Written: November 5, 2015 For Debbie's "Shall We Retourne" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/28/2015 8:37:00 AM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/26/2015 7:50:00 PM
A fantastic write, Heather! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/22/2015 9:23:00 AM
The form sang for you! Conrad's and thanks so much for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form! Light & Love
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Date: 11/21/2015 11:17:00 PM
Heather, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2015 12:56:00 AM
Beautiful, make me look almost look forward to snow and Christmas!!!! :)
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Date: 11/8/2015 11:24:00 PM
The flow of your wonderful piece depicted imagery that brought your write to life within this reader.........A.M.
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:04:00 PM
So beautiful...I can well imagine it!. I like the sound as I read it out loud. All the best in Debbie's contest, Heather!
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Date: 11/6/2015 3:20:00 PM
wow Heather, I hope I can do this form justice as you have. It's one of the next ones I want to try out of the many contests. I am SO behind here!!! A win for sure with this beauty.
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Date: 11/6/2015 12:05:00 PM
Full marks for this beauty, Heather! The imagery is beautiful; the feeling uplifting! gl in the contest. [lovely avatar, too] // paul
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:21:00 AM
Wow such a beauty Heather.. wonderful imagery n very lovely reflections here.. Gl in contest... sure will do well!
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Date: 11/6/2015 12:16:00 AM
Excellent poem, Heather! Great imagery and effect with this challenging poetry form. Good luck with n the contest :)
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