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Christmas Day

A REAL HOME If I stand on my toes I can see it... Lights and balls in a tree I want one, so much! I asked, but he looked at me so angrily I never asked again, I know he will hurt me again, and such... I want to be an angel at school Oh yes please, I will stand so still With a white dress and wings But I am a boy, they laugh so hard I don't understand Christmas Today the parents were at school To sit at dinner with their kids I sat very close to a mom As if I can let down my guard But I don't, I looked like a fool She regarded me so strangely I want a real home, a tree, and angels I just want to belong. Is that so wrong? *** January 2, 2017, 1st Place in contest: Christmas Day Sponsor: Alexis Y

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Date: 3/6/2017 10:22:00 PM
Hi Darren, Congratulations on your first place win in my Christmas Day contest: -) Alexis
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Darren White
Date: 3/6/2017 11:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Alexis :)
Date: 1/3/2017 4:12:00 PM
A heart-rending poem, Darren. Children are so precious and innocent and you relayed that message perfectly. Carole Duet
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you Carole, children are and people should take good care of them :)
Date: 1/3/2017 11:31:00 AM
You had some sad experiences, Darren. Sorry about that. I love how you told your story. Your poetry rings with such sincerity.
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 11:41:00 AM
I am happy where I am now, Andrea :) But I had to go back to childhood experiences and tell it from my child's perspective ...
Date: 1/3/2017 9:19:00 AM
Wow, talk about a tearjerker. This was so sad and lonely and desperate feeling, it caused my heart to ache. Nicely expressed Darren. Good luck in the contest.
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 9:23:00 AM
Thank you Chris :) And Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2017 5:51:00 PM
Good luck on the contest, sweetie... Beautifully written and heartbreaking... (((Darren))) <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 12:44:00 AM
(((Clau))) <3
Date: 1/2/2017 3:41:00 PM
Every emotional poem well done x
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 12:44:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/2/2017 2:57:00 PM
Nice flow to this heart wrenching poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Darren White
Date: 1/3/2017 12:42:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 1/2/2017 2:17:00 PM
a very heart touching write and the last line is perfect..good luck in the contest
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Darren White
Date: 1/2/2017 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Frederic :)
Date: 1/2/2017 12:56:00 PM
aww Darren the imagery is absolutely heartbreaking:-( hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 1/2/2017 1:00:00 PM
Don't be sad :)

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