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Okay, how am I doing, Soupers?  Hope you enjoyed!

Christmas day on planet E each pine tree deliciously planted uprooted the sky is tinsillated, stars replaced by screwy bulbs and to top it all off – mind you, like a cherry on top a fat man in a red suit is flying through outer space a U N I V E R S A L catastrophe

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Date: 12/24/2016 8:44:00 AM
Ha ha, a fun one. Merry Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/24/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you, Richard! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/13/2016 9:49:00 AM
okay, I just read the definition, etc. of Vogon and your poem is the best of the worst I have read. It brings to mind the movie Santa Clause meets the Martians.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 1:07:00 PM
I loved that movie as a kid...lol! Thank you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 1:06:00 PM
I loved that movie as a kid...lol! Thank you!
Date: 12/13/2016 9:29:00 AM
O U B onna roll! GOTD! (Giggle of the day award). thanks for morning cheer ~ john
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2016 9:33:00 AM
Thank you, John! I'm smiling! See how I drag my feet getting out the door to work! Later!

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