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Christmas Castaways

Christmas Castaways My good friend Jerry’s unemployment had run out I feared print journalism’s future was in doubt But while we commiserated on Christmas Eve A disheartening report was broadcast on TV Local law enforcement had been busy that day People found living in the woods had been cast away These homeless families had set up tents on state land And police had ordered these squatters to disband How heartless it seemed that these souls should be tossed out Poor folks who had nothing and learned to do without We shut off the TV, couldn’t take it anymore And headed for a café with joyful décor Just twenty degrees as we drove down the highway Where a sight neath a bridge caused far more dismay A couple and their small child huddled together Trying hard to stay warm in cold winter weather Sad images of Bethlehem flashed through my mind With no room at the inn for the savior of mankind I looked at my friend and he returned my glance We both felt this family needed a second chance “Pull over,” he murmured, “we can’t just leave them here These folks deserve to share in our holiday cheer” So money that could have bought steak dinners for two We used to buy hamburgers for our five-member crew Some cash left over for a room at Motel Six Not a real solution – a temporary fix We returned Christmas Day; our church would take them in But they had checked out; it was half past eleven For long I’ve wondered what happened to this family And what each Christmas holds for those who are needy *Recollection of Christmas, 2007, when the economy started to fail.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/10/2015 9:34:00 AM
Well done Carolyn on this merited podium finish! Very lovey and touching recollection. Congratulations! hugs // paul
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:37:00 AM
What a beautiful package Carolyn,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 8:39:00 PM
Excellent write and inspirational! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/9/2015 8:00:00 PM
Sometimes I think its harder to accept charity than to give it. I hope you had a great Christmas with sis, my angel's still twinkling! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:54:00 PM
A beautiful and touching poem, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:35:00 PM
I also came from a poor background, so I know that this family was very grateful for the kindness you have shown them. Well done, Carolyn! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:07:00 PM
so touching and sad many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:37:00 PM
Good hearts, a fine note worthy tale! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:03:00 PM
LNC..I missed this first time around..what a story...Im so glad you stopped..that is the spirit of xmas.love you..hope your catching a BIG one. Bg congrats...
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Date: 5/28/2011 9:59:00 AM
Awesome to read this one again Carolyn ; ) congratulations on your win.. Hope you are having loads of fun.. Love Wilma
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Date: 5/28/2011 8:18:00 AM
A real beauty... Your temporary fix for these folks touches me deeply. such big hearted folks. Congrats for winning with your caring poem and actions. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/28/2011 7:44:00 AM
I had this pegged as a winner when I first read it, congrats on your win Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2011 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2011 10:15:00 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Carolyn, on your placement in my contest. As you know, I always judge them blind, without knowing who the authors are. So, when I come here to see who won, I get a wonderful surprise. It is so very nice to see you here among the winners. Thank you for supporting my contest...and for your patience in waiting for the results. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 5/27/2011 9:40:00 AM
Congratulatons on your win in the "Good Deeds" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2011 6:16:00 AM
this was great congrats on you win my friend. cory
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Constance's "Saddest Christmas Ever"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:37:00 PM
Such a sad story, in the true spirit of Christmas you provided for someone in need. I am sure they remember it as being a blessing. Congrats on this touching poem...Karla
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:51:00 PM
So touching and sad. God help the needy and poor. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:16:00 AM
Sorry, Carolyn, it's second place win
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn
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Date: 12/4/2010 5:48:00 PM
I'm so glad this was in the winner's list...where it belongs! A heartfelt Christmas story, that reads like a Hallmark movie....so very touching and sad. You have a big heart, Carolyn. And I thank you so kindly for your support in all my poetry as well. Congratulations on this lovely poem! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:00:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn, on second place in my contest with this heartwarming story, I just loved it~~
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:38:00 PM
This is very touching, Carolyn-- I am sure that family was truly grateful for the spirit of Christmas that you shared with them--I would like to believe that you gave them hope, you know? That there are still people who actually do help from their hearts-- kudos to you for that! Thanks so much for passing by my poems & for the congrats-- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 11/24/2010 12:05:00 PM
Wow, sad, yet beautiful. Some may read this and think you and your friend gave a terrific Christmas gift - I read it and think that you and your friend were gifted with the Christmas Spirit. It really is better to give than receive - although you may wonder what this family's future may hold, your gift of giving to them and then sharing it with us in wonderful rhyme, will benefit many more than just one family. You have inspired me to do more for others with this poem - thanks. Joe
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