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Chocolate-Trochee

Rich chocolate 'pon my thin lips. On taste buds twang sits Minute; lifetime on big hips. Now clothes don't fit To a diet must commit Carrots celery dip Peanut chocolate dip permit My pants can now zip Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: The 7/5 Trochee Poetry Contest using choc lit as pronunciation Celery pronounced cel ry

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Date: 5/20/2012 9:44:00 AM
HAHA, Like this one a lot!
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:03:00 AM
awesome! andera will totally love this since she loves food so much. I love the 1st verse :) everything goes right to my hips (and thighs) too! diets - ugh.
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Date: 5/8/2012 4:52:00 PM
love it luv it lubbit.... the modern curse of what you eat, come back to sit an stay in the meat, the blubber is arising , unwanted an surprising , so fat cant see me feet, drattalising:( but i gor a well padded seat:)
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Date: 5/8/2012 3:48:00 PM
Ps. Smile ~ "Your Welcome & Thank You, 'My Beautiful Love.'" *
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Date: 5/8/2012 2:42:00 PM
Clever Sara, love the "lifetime on hips" line; a truth we avoid at our own peril. All the best in the contest, a wonderful entry! :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:45:00 AM
LOL, got a chuckle from this one, Sara - and I know Andrea will love it too
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:03:00 AM
Haha oh goodness Sara, you just made my day :)
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Date: 5/8/2012 7:37:00 AM
Humorous write dear poet ! It was fun reading Sara ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 5/7/2012 2:23:00 PM
Smile ˜ Owww, I Think By Now Your Beauty Knows Exactly What You Do Unto Myself Don't You, My Dear Precious & Beautiful, Beautiful Sara * Or Perhaps Tis Just Myself Dreaming These Dreams; In Chocolate Swirls Amid Strawberry ? Thank You, For Your Beauties Kind Visit &, I Love Your Pretty Poem * My Love Always, John!:) ˜
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