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Chocolate Cookie

CHOCOLATE COOKIE Animal fair With coffee Chocolate cookie Cats in here Critters out there Tiny feet Stepping time Without care Cats in here Critters out there Spring dance Sun dripping lace Amber streaks of play In roundabout chase At animal fair Dave Austin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2016 3:38:00 PM

coming back here because I love it and the title so much!!

Daver Austin
Date: 5/18/2016 10:45:00 AM

Thanks, dear. We have a bran new kitten on our front porch. The mama only had one kitten. Isn't that unusual. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2016 12:34:00 AM

I really like this one, Daver, as you know already!!

Daver Austin
Date: 4/22/2016 12:49:00 PM

I bought a package of fig newtons yesterday, but they don't compare to a good chocolate cookie. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2016 10:24:00 PM

Haha, I came back to dip you in Chocolate Daver.... Goodnight. LINDA

Daver Austin
Date: 4/22/2016 12:51:00 PM

I just told Andrea about fig newtons. They're no good unless dipped in chocolate. As you might guess, I love chocolate. Love, daver

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/21/2016 5:24:00 PM

like this daver, 'sun dripping lace, tiny stepping time' makes the imagination roam.

Harry Horsman
Date: 4/21/2016 5:25:00 PM

tiny feet

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2016 3:50:00 PM

Haha, now soup made it easy to follow my favorite poets... ;) I feel like chocolate all of a sudden. A sweet dancing chocolate cookie having fun, before someone bites into it... Awesome..Linda

Daver Austin
Date: 4/21/2016 10:03:00 AM

Wonderful, P.D. you got it. These whims are nebulous. Something just pops into mind and you write around it. You do this too. Love, daver

Paul Callus

Date: 4/20/2016 1:18:00 PM

Cats & Cookies...a playful and sweet combination! Thanks for the imagery and entertainment! ~ Regards // paul

Daver Austin
Date: 4/21/2016 10:09:00 AM

Thanks. I guess you think animals are sweet too. Love, daver

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/20/2016 1:08:00 PM

how heartening is this write, dave.. now, to the fair i go!..huggs

Daver Austin
Date: 4/21/2016 10:12:00 AM

With one poet - a real famous one - it was a red wheelbarrow. The chocolate cookie is a spur-of-the-moment whim. Thanks, nette. Love, daver

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/20/2016 11:00:00 AM

I'll take that one of them thar cookies, but please no peeking freens for me.:) I know they aren't so easy to digest. Keep well, enjoy the sun! Love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 4/21/2016 10:15:00 AM

Cookies are sweet, one or two, and so, my dear, are youwho. Hugs, daver